A short dystopian tale of toil and seeds of rebellion.
The MC is so disconnected, a part in the machine. Scary. The ending adds a touch of humanity. Fine work, Shane.
Thanks for reading, K.C.! Grateful for the positive words.
Excellent writing. The tone and voice of the MC really drove this home. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for reading, Alexander. I really appreciate the comments.
I really enjoyed this one, Shane. The prose works perfectly with the theme and character. Well done.
Sean! You made my Monday morning with this. Thanks for reading and especially for the positive words. It’s nice to see the intent of the tone and form come through as more than just thin writing.
It never felt thin to me. My favorite Bzdok piece so far.
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Whoa. I'm seeing clones and it makes me nervous. In a good way!👏👏👏
Thanks for reading and for the positive energy, Ann!
The MC is so disconnected, a part in the machine. Scary. The ending adds a touch of humanity. Fine work, Shane.
Thanks for reading, K.C.! Grateful for the positive words.
Excellent writing. The tone and voice of the MC really drove this home. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for reading, Alexander. I really appreciate the comments.
I really enjoyed this one, Shane. The prose works perfectly with the theme and character. Well done.
Sean! You made my Monday morning with this. Thanks for reading and especially for the positive words. It’s nice to see the intent of the tone and form come through as more than just thin writing.
It never felt thin to me. My favorite Bzdok piece so far.
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Whoa. I'm seeing clones and it makes me nervous. In a good way!👏👏👏
Thanks for reading and for the positive energy, Ann!